March 28, 2005


  • Chasm


    Walking through a painting in a lucid friend's dream,
    The storm clouds rolling in to the reality which I deem
    Unreasonably cold and unbearably sad,
    For it's the blinded who are consuming the visions we once had.


    - broken_optimist


    (extended version to include warmth)


     

Comments (2)

  • Deep. :) Thanks for the comment on my site. Nope I don't remember reading one from you before but I appreciate that you mentioned it. I like your poetry. :)

  • And your photos specially. :) Light in the clouds... Very optimistic. :)

Comments are closed.

Post a Comment

Recent Posts

Recent Comments

Categories